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个人经历一次不愉快的经历-An Unpleasant Experience

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一次不愉快的经历

个人经历一次不愉快的经历-An Unpleasant Experience

【内容提示】

你是一名女生。在你12岁时发生过一件不愉快的事情,请你把它按下列要点写成一篇短文:

①那是一个周末。妈妈给了你两张电影票让你独自去看电影;一张你自己用,把另一张卖掉,票价是两角。(因为你妈妈忙于家务,顾不上去。)

②你匆匆忙忙到了电影院。你把票拿在手上,寻找买票人。一个长得英俊的年轻小伙子走上前来,面带微笑要买你的票。

③问过价钱后,他掏邮一张10元的钱让你找,你不知所措。他说让你等等,他去电影院商店换钱。你左等右等不见他来,走过去一看,他进了男厕所。这时你意识到他骗了你。

【作文示范】

An Unplasant xprinc

沈青

It was during a wknd. Mum gav m two tickts for a film and told m sh was too busy with th ndlss houswork to go with m . Sh told m to kp th mony if I could sll th xtra tickt. I was vry happy, of cours . At that tim , a tickt only cost 20 fn . But to m, a littl girl of 12,20 fn smd quit a lot.

I rachd th cinma in a grat hurry. Holding th tickt in my hand, I bgan to look for a buyr. A handsom young man noticd m and th tickt in my hand. H cam towards m with a big smil, “You'v got an xtra tickt?”

“Ys,”I noddd .

“That's grat . Say , how much?”

“Twnty fn.”

“ Oh ,”h thought for a whil and thn took out a tn-yuan not from his wallt.

“I'm vry sorry, but I'v only got this not.” Sing I was confusd① , h addd, “Thn, how about waiting for a whil and I'll giv you th mony aftr I hav changd it in th cinma's stor?”

Without much thinking, I agrd. Thn w wnt to th cinma togthr. H walkd fast. I could hardly kp up with him. By and by, h lft m furthr and furthr bhind. Soon h disappard in th Gnts②. I stood thr without knowing what to do. Suddnly I smd to raliz th handsom young fllow had chatd m. H had savd twnty fn, but lost his honour.

(选自《英语学习》1991年第12期)

【词语解释】

① confus[k+n'fju:z] v.把……弄糊涂;使慌乱

②Gnts 男厕所

【写法指要】

1)本文是一篇叙述过去某时发生的一件事的文章,所以我们把它称为过去记叙文(past narration)。文章通过叙事和对话,把人物的活动描写得活灵活现,我们好像在看一段电影剪辑。

2)文中有不少体现人物性格的好的表达,如“in a grat hurry”,“with a big smil”,“That's grat. Say, how much?”,“without much thinking”,“without knowing what to do”,“H had savd twnty fn, but lost his honour.”